Monday, August 22, 2011

In Silence,,



 ! You are these...more than weird
 ,You don't want to ask
, You don't like to be asked
, You don't demand 
,  You don't give me call 
, You don't love me 
, You don't miss me 
 , But you said i am Gods' gift to you 
 ,That's the only thing i hold on to 
, But sometimes i come to ask 
what is really in store for me
,I am just a human being with a bag of loads 
 ,with a sacks of flaws
 ,with a basket of insecurities 
 ,with a tons of fears
, and with a  acres of imperfections
 ,and hectares of darks
 , Like you i also get tired
 , tired of being rejected
 ,tired of so many protocols 
 ,Shall i then kill all my affections and be in Silence 
 , or choose to love you in Silence
, because in Silence
 .There's no rejection and no one owns you but me 
ADITYAA99

6 comments:

  1. I am just a human being with a bag of loads
    with a sacks of flaws
    with a basket of insecurities
    with a tons of fears
    and with a acres of imperfections

    Terrific... Awesome writing.
    All humane problem n complexities in few lines.

    Loved it.

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  2. There is something called faith..belief in a person. Does not matter how many insecurities you have.If you have faith in thE person then relationship or friendship is like a rock.Nothing can change its memorable destiny.

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  3. @Rivercat..Thanks !
    @Jyotes..Thanks witty ! Yes , all humane complexities.
    @KP..Very well said sir! Yes,they said Faith can move mountains! THanks for your precious time!

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  4. This is really beautiful in the emotions it expresses...Like the Bard said love is not love which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove.

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  5. ..very well said ,thanks so much for your time idol!

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