Friday, August 5, 2011

You are...fine

Is it nothing to you?

I almost couldn't danced with the music........
 You are.. mute....fine
 You are deaf...fine
 You are.. blind..fine
 You are ..strict ..fine
 You are..moody ...fine
You are crazy..fine
 You are... non love advocate..fine
 You wanna leave...fine
You wanna go....fine
You wanna vanish...fine
You wanna hide ..fine
what else do you want ? 
What else? When is enough ,enough ?
When is fine ,,really fine ?
ALL is fine with me honey...but the truth is
despite of everything ..you are still LOVED.

7 comments:

  1. that was so intense n deep.
    though poignant but loved it.

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  2. beauty of a poem...i second jyoti...good work done

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  3. @Jyotes..haha intense really ? burning? Thanks pretty witty!

    @Solitary W....Thanks a lot! be around!

    Gaurav....Thanks for that kind word and for being always here.

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  4. shows the extreme dedication of heart...and degree of pureness of ur love........just loved ur poem.....n d last line says everything.....despite of everything ..you are still LOVED....nicely expressed.....keep writing frd......:)

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  5. @Dr Naveen..Thanks so much , but don't i need a clinical help yet ? hahaha ;D

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  6. i was not aware there is a funny gal inside u.......cool angel ;)

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